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Forbidden Workings by =erinyx:iconerinyx:


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On a role? I think so. Third submission in a day!

Tell me what you think: ideas, criticisms (please be mature), spelling corrections, general themes, etc...

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(c) =erinyx, got it?

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:iconthefatbasterdii:
i like it. i get a freeing feeling from it i don't know why but i really like this.

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V1 1v. The man fat of knowledge and wisdom and the basterd of society. I am The Fat Basterd. If you are looking for ideas out of this world please read some of my stuff.
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Thank you so much! I was hoping that would be the effect!!! :D

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“Religions die when they are proved to be true. Science is the record of dead religions.” -Oscar Wilde

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come have a glimpse inside my mind::
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:iconguagna:
paints a vivid scene. i love the celestial and mystical metaphors that describe her. only you could pull off making references to the plutonian gates and the peanuts in the same poem :giggle:

:+fav:


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98% of teenagers drink or have been around alcohol.
Paste this if you like muffins.

Hope dangles on a string
Like slow spinning redemption
Winding in and winding out
The shine of it has caught my eye
:iconanurbannomad:
Gorgeous descriptions!
:iconerinyx:
Thank you!! :D

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“Religions die when they are proved to be true. Science is the record of dead religions.” -Oscar Wilde

Use punctuation with conviction

come have a glimpse inside my mind::
[link]
:iconerinyx:
Thanks nance! There's been a general theme of starstuff recently in my writing. It probs has something to do with my future major..

lol. Plutonian=> English Class today. I had to do it. And the Peanuts reference? You know how when they dance, they shuffle their feet? yeah. like that.

:D


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“Religions die when they are proved to be true. Science is the record of dead religions.” -Oscar Wilde

Use punctuation with conviction

come have a glimpse inside my mind::
[link]
:iconguagna:
haha i got that reference. and is the ending a spin off of "nevermore"? (someonesgotpoeonthebrain)

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98% of teenagers drink or have been around alcohol.
Paste this if you like muffins.

Hope dangles on a string
Like slow spinning redemption
Winding in and winding out
The shine of it has caught my eye
:iconerinyx:
I think that it was a subconscious 'nevermore' lol.
(somedoeshavepoeonthebrain)--> try saying that five times fast =P


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“Religions die when they are proved to be true. Science is the record of dead religions.” -Oscar Wilde

Use punctuation with conviction

come have a glimpse inside my mind::
[link]
:iconguagna:
someonedoeshavepoeonthebrain?

i can say it, i just can't read it. i keep wanting to say shave, doe, brian (or bryan =P), and i'm somehow finding shampoo. :giggle:


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98% of teenagers drink or have been around alcohol.
Paste this if you like muffins.

Hope dangles on a string
Like slow spinning redemption
Winding in and winding out
The shine of it has caught my eye

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